How to write a composition in the activity center
on Monday, we came to the cultural center. As soon as we got off the bus, we saw that the cultural center was much bigger and more beautiful than we thought. We organized the team outside and waited for our aunt to show us around the cultural center. Once inside, the aunt of the cultural center told us about the origin of Zhangjiagang cultural center and the composition of the museum. We know from her words that the cultural center project covers an area of 230 mu, with a total investment of more than 700 million yuan and a total construction area of 75000 square meters, which was fully completed on September 26, 2009; The cultural center consists of eight functional building projects: library, cultural center, archives, science and Technology Museum, art museum, city exhibition hall, Grand Theater and service area
we first came to the city exhibition hall. The staff aunt first gave us a summary of the main parts of the city exhibition hall: the city exhibition hall mainly through the text, pictures, sound, photoelectric, image, model, good interactive games and so on. I saw four words on the wall called "ancient village lost". I don't quite understand what it means. After reading the notes below, I know that Zhangjiagang has a long history. Before Majiabang culture, there were human activities. The total area of Dongshan village cultural site in the west is about 60000 square meters, which is more than 8000 years ago. It is the earliest Neolithic cultural site found in the Taihu Lake Basin and the lower reaches of the Yangtze River. The xujiawan cultural site in Luyuan in the East, more than 5500 years ago, is located in the south of Luyuan in Tangqiao town, with a total area of about 20000 square meters. It belongs to the Songze culture of the Neolithic age. The discovery of the site has pushed the original coastline 5000 years ago by more than 10 kilometers northward. I can feel the long time from these figures, but it still retains what we want to explore, History is amazing. When I grow up, I will make contributions to exploring and solving the unsolved mysteries
next, we went to the second floor and visited various colorful models. I was very happy to see these models. There are two reasons for this. 1、 I found my home from these models. 2、 From these models, based on what I have learned and seen, I can infer the size of these models in reality
then, we went to the third floor. As soon as the elevator reached the top, I saw a strong slogan: Golden Port, a model of human settlements. Let's turn right, ah! How big the model is! We first saw a film, this film is to do how vivid ah! But what I pay more attention to is the following model. The staff put a lot of small light bulbs on the model. The projection is colorful. It's really beautiful! But such a short time only a few minutes, but I learned a lot of knowledge
after visiting the city exhibition hall, we went to the art gallery again. The only two things that attracted me were the mayor and the Secretary of the municipal Party committee. Who are they? The aunt told me that they are Yao LINRONG and Xu Meijian. There is also the honor we have won. The aunt of the staff told us that our city has won many awards, including "national health city", "national cultural advanced county", "national special ecation advanced city", etc., totaling more than 160. I am very proud of our city of Zhangjiagang
ring this visit, I learned a lot and saw a lot. Ah! Zhangjiagang cultural center, when free, I will come again, I will come again to read, watch our Chinese history!
in the twinkling of an eye, the 10 day training is coming to an end. In these 10 days, there are joy, excitement and depression. The happy thing is that we get along well with each other. It also makes me understand the procere of starting a business. The depressing thing is that we have not achieved very good results in setting up a business several times. But I think, as long as I have the heart and continue to strengthen the exploration, I will not lose in the starting line
it's my dream to start a business, but I find that when I really want to start my own business, there are many things to consider, and it's hard to start with. SYB training course helps me to sort out the idea of starting a business step by step. After training, I will be able to decide whether I am suitable to start a business. What kind of enterprise to run, to measure whether their business ideas are realistic and feasible, and on this basis to form their own business plan, it makes my dream more firm
in today's society, college students are facing great challenges in choosing jobs. Entrepreneurship has become a good way out, entrepreneurship is the trend of today's social development. Encouraging entrepreneurship is not only concive to broadening the employment opportunities of workers and creating more jobs for the society, but also concive to realizing the personal value of workers, forming an atmosphere of innovation and entrepreneurship in the whole society, and promoting the sustainable, rapid and healthy development of social economy. In such a big environment, college students have more advantages, but also face great challenges. Advantages: we have enthusiasm, vitality, knowledge and courage; Challenge: in the big vat of society, we are lack of experience, have no good right and wrong discrimination ability, and have no large social circle, which leads to the blindness and randomness in my entrepreneurship. SYB training helps entrepreneurs prepare early and has a good monitoring effect
in the 10 day teaching course, two successful entrepreneurs were invited to tell us their successful experiences, which inspired me a lot. Boss Liu, in particular, used the word "win" to tell us the various elements of starting an enterprise, and told us that we must make profits when running an enterprise, which is the key to the success or failure of an enterprise. We should know what is the cost, how to price and how to make profits. It also tells us that if you want to start a business, as long as you have a 6-point grasp, you should strive to implement it. When you have a 10 point grasp, there will be no market opportunity. The market economy is vast, so we must avoid single wooden bridge
in the 10 days of SYB entrepreneurship training, I believe that if there is a dream, we should work hard to implement it. I also believe that with the formation of market-oriented employment mechanism and the implementation of preferential policies for reemployment, China will usher in a new high tide of entrepreneurship. I hope I am also a small boat in the sea of market economy, riding the wind and waves to achieve success. I am, you are... In July 2011, a wave of entrepreneurial boom began, our village is no exception. Under the organization and call of zhaotan rural social affairs office, we attended a series of entrepreneurship training lectures. Because of my present job, I didn't get on the spot every day, but my husband persevered and actively participated. Whenever he comes back from the lecture, he immediately shares his feelings and experience with me. He said: "the entrepreneurship training class in recent days has helped me to have a more rational understanding of entrepreneurship, to learn a lot of knowledge about entrepreneurship preparation, and to be more passionate about entrepreneurship. After listening to the class, I feel that my nervous thinking is active, and I have a preliminary understanding of how to start a business. It is also a kind of training and challenge for me to take part in the work in the future. After participating in the entrepreneurship training, my character has also changed a little. In the past, when I encountered such scenes, I was mostly stage fright and never spoke much. But this
here are two special exhibitions for us. One is science and technology exhibition, the other is fire safety exhibition
we first came to the technology exhibition hall. As soon as I entered the gate, I saw many kinds of scientific and technological procts. There are generators, pole wind vanes, attractors... One of my favorite is the iron ball roller coaster. There is a track like a roller coaster. At the start of the track, there is an iron ball. You just need a little push, the ball will fall into the track, and slide along the track, like a roller coaster to the end. Listen to the teacher, although we don't use much energy, because this model converts the thrust into kinetic energy, so the iron ball will "move forward" and reach the end as if it is equipped with power. People use this principle to invent and design our favorite roller coaster, which is an example of applying technology to life
in fact, as long as you have a pair of eyes that are good at discovering, science in life is everywhere. For example, we all love to play "rampage shoes", is not in the sole of a pulley, and then use inertia forward
farewell to the science and Technology Museum, we come to the exhibition hall of "fire safety". On the big screen are playing pictures of several big fires happening all over the country. The merciless fire devil devoured not only countless properties, but also countless lives. How many businesses and families have lost their property e to the fire, and how many families are crying for their loved ones lost in the fire... In the face of this painful lesson, we should be more alert. We should always pay attention to eliminate the fire risk around us, rece the probability of fire, and build a warm and safe environment for ourselves and everyone. Students, work hard with me, right
finally, we also concted a Q & A on fire safety knowledge and learned many skills of self-help or saving people in fire. For example, when a fire breaks out, we must cover our nose and mouth with a wet towel, bend over and evacuate from the safe passage. Never take the elevator; When you see a fire in the distance, you should dial 119 in time to accurately report the location of the fire, so that the firefighters can arrive at the scene in time ·······
this activity opened a door to the palace of science for us, and made me have a strong interest in the science around me. At the same time, through the fire safety ecation, let us have a profound understanding of the harm of fire, but also let us have a certain sense of fire safety. I really hope the school can organize more similar activities to broaden our horizons and improve our practical ability.
the campus activities carried out by the school are rich and colorful, including learning to sing folk songs, learning to dance folk dances, squadron display... In this activity, my favorite is the team meeting held in the water cube on May 31,
at about 5 o'clock that day, we came to the Olympic swimming venue - the National Swimming Center (Water Cube). After everyone is seated, the team will officially start. The chorus members sang the songs first, and then the first grade students' joining ceremony. One by one, the first-year students came onto the stage and presented a wreath to 55 minority students. With the team song, the minority students brought red scarves for the first-year students. After the ceremony, minority students met with us one by one to say hello“ I'm from Dong nationality. My name is Huang Xun Festival. I made a self introction and briefly introced my nationality. After listening to their introction, I was surprised
I haven't even heard of many ethnic minorities, let alone their customs! It seems that I will learn more and master more knowledge in the future. Several representatives of ethnic minority partners also performed for us, including unique dances, distinctive songs and so on. This time I really got to know the ethnic minorities. They have their own customs and unique songs and dances.
although I can't understand the dialect in the songs, I still feel that it has an unspeakable and special beauty; Although I don't know dance, I still think it's very elegant. I have a deeper understanding of the diversity and profundity of national culture. After the performance, all the students present performed five pieces of Ethnic Dances for ethnic minority students. The dance was very beautiful, and the students of ethnic minorities also danced with us. For a moment, we were all involved in the dance. With beautiful songs, the team meeting is over. To celebrate the June 1 children's day, we also watched the legends of Beijing.
I like this national activity. It makes me understand a lot of knowledge and brings me a lot of joy.
before writing a composition, you should first think about the center, write around the center, sort out the content you want to write, and write down the specific activities
when writing a composition, you should write down what you see and hear in the activity, as well as your own inner feelings. You should not only observe the whole process of the activity, but also focus on one or two things, one or two scenes or some characters, and then carefully write down the observed content
when writing an activity composition, you should pay attention to the time and place of the activity, the participants and the situation of the activity. The idea of writing is to first write the beginning of the activity, then the process of the activity, then the end of the activity, and organize the materials in the order of the activity. You can also sort out the order of several activities according to different directions and write them layer by layer
when writing such articles, it's easy to be confused between the primary and secondary, to grasp the key points, and to record the process of activities as a running account. Therefore, we must select materials and organize materials around the center. The materials that can express the central idea should be more specific and detailed. The materials that have little to do with the central idea but can set off in the article should be more general and brief. Only in this way can the content of the article be detailed and appropriate. We should also pay attention to expressing our true feelings, because we usually take part in the activities we remember in person. Since we take part in the activities, we must have our own ideas and opinions. Just write them down according to the facts, so as to be the most natural and true
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it's true that today's real life is rich, colorful and unfathomable, which makes it difficult for us to adapt. On Saturday, my classmates and I participated in the social practice under the organization, and I suddenly felt that I had grown up a lot! Our practice site this time is Tangzhuang villa in Jinshang community, where there are many overseas residents. When I came here, I felt the "great country" of our motherland for the first time. We graally began to practice with the help of aunt cleaner
our task this time is to clean the fallen leaves on the lawn! This task is very arous, but I refused to admit defeat, looking at the vast lawn, I knew for the first time as a cleaner is how hard, how great! So my cleaning career began like this! I took a heavy broom, at a loss, do not know how to start, at this time I saw my mother! So with the help of my mother, I graally learned to control the difficult "little guy". Looking at my mother's familiar control of the broom, I can't help feeling sad. My mother is not very old, but she has white hair. Mother took the broom and told us: "this kind of broom is very heavy, you should be very careful when sweeping, don't hurt it! And it's going to sweep backwards, otherwise it's not clean! " I listen word by word, there is always a feeling in my heart that can not be described by words, and I find that my tears have been wandering in my eyes, but I still try to hold it. Looking at the fallen leaves all over the lawn, my heart can not help but issued a sigh! Time mercilessly, graally we have practiced for an hour, but look at this lawn, I can't help feeling that I am so weak and incompetent. Time has passed for so long, but our achievements are only so little. Later, I learned from my mother's experience, and graally mastered this naughty little guy, and the practice graally ended! Looking at the green lawn, I felt "the most glorious work" for the first time. People who come and go always praise us for cleaning carefully
I admire Hong Xinyi for this practice. She is also a student with physical defects in our class, and this practice let me fully know how kind her heart is! She did not pass a place, always with her hands can not clean some of the garbage, in the case of ensuring not to hurt anything, throw it into the garbage can
in this practice, I fully realized that helping people can be so happy! But I also know that the work is not easy! Therefore, we should study hard in the future, but also social practice ability, seize the opportunity, meet the challenge, adapt to the complex and diverse real life! We should also learn from Comrade Lei Feng as Chairman Mao described! Therefore, we all need to be living Lei Feng in our life and help people in need. Of course, it is within the scope of our ability!
collection of writing skills for senior high school entrance examination
"a good beginning is half the success". The beginning is very important in the article. It can refine the center, complete the structure and attract readers. It can make the article icing on the cake and make the reader tired. This is not an exaggeration. Therefore, it is very necessary to spend more time, think more and write a good beginning. When I was a child, I was obsessed with the "children with wings - Angels" printed on comic books and greeting cards. The pure white wings like velvet and cotton are the symbol of all good things. They decorate my childhood dreams At the beginning of Chongqing man Fen's article "white wings decorate my dream..."
this article explains that I like white wings at the beginning, and uses "it decorates my childhood dream" to refer to the title of the article as well as the following. This kind of beginning can give a person crisp and neat, enter a topic quickly, not branch not vine feeling. It should be the first choice at the beginning of the composition< The leaves are wings that can't fly; Wings are leaves that fall in the sky Chongqing man fenwen's "wings, leaves falling in the sky" inscription)
this inscription uses the method of metaphor to reveal the relationship between "wings" and "leaves"“ How can wings and leaves be signed equal? This question, like a mystery, arouses the curiosity of readers. Only after reading the full text, can you know that this is a fairy tale of "the ugly ckling becomes the little swan". The author uses a fallen leaf instead of "the ugly ckling" to write about his unrepentant choice, his persistent dream, and his beautiful heart. It is novel and original, and refreshing< It's hot summer again, and there's a cicada calling Beijing Man Fen's article "power comes from those eyes" begins)
this article does not fall into other people's stereotype, but develops a new way, starting from a small point, from a pair of specific visible and sensible "eyes", to write about the transmission of a mathematics teacher's eye emotion, which brings sunshine like warmth and sudden progress to every student in the class. The description of the natural environment at the beginning of the story not only exaggerates the specific atmosphere, sets off the mood of the characters, but also promotes the development of the plot< Just after 8 o'clock in the morning, an angry mother pulled a tall boy to open the door of Professor Zhang's office. As soon as she entered the door, her mother began to blame Professor Zhang for her children. And the boy seems to be indifferent, always looking up at the ceiling, the body is still constantly shaking. From time to time also back to the last sentence to express opposition In fact, it's not like this in Laiwu City, Shandong Province)
at the beginning of the article, the "bad" children in the eyes of mothers were greatly exaggerated. However, when I went to the professor, the professor easily pointed out the "advantages" of children. Such a comparison can only show that it's not that the children are bad, it's that the "mother" has a problem with her vision and the idea of ecating children< I am a devil, a devil with angels in my heart The title of the article is "let the angel stay in the heart forever", but the first sentence is "I am the devil", which makes people feel strange. Further down, the first sentence of the first paragraph is "I am the devil". Until the end, I will appreciate the beauty of this reverse idea by reading it carefully. It is highlighting "angel"
6. The angle is novel, and the feeling and reason blend
example 6. "The queen bee has a needle, and the orange is divided on both sides. The most poisonous thing in the world is the heart of an alteress. " Since the publication of Water Margin, people have evaluated Pan Jinlian as one of its characters. This character has become a typical example of "obscene woman" and "slut" in people's mind
Pan Jinlian, you are really wronged In fact, it's not like this at the beginning of man Fen's essay in Laiwu City, Shandong Province)
the little writer wrote the familiar story of Water Margin into his composition, but he didn't feel it repeated. This paper quotes the beginning of "Water Margin" and skillfully leads to the object of discussion -- Pan Jinlian. It is reasonable to show her own cultural heritage and contrast it with her own point of view
7. The sentence structure is neat and implicit.
Example 7. He once yearned for the hero's happiness of "King Qin swept Liuhe, tiger saw he xiongya" and pursued the hermit's happiness of "picking chrysanthemums under the East fence, leisurely seeing Nanshan"; He has also explored the happiness of the people with lofty ideals who "will be at the top of the mountain and see the small mountains at a glance". But I am me after all, I want to pick the most beautiful happiness, to embellish the regretless youth! So, I got on the happiness train and started the journey of looking for happiness The quotation of the poem at the beginning of the article makes the language of the article quaint, fluent and full of poetic meaning, rich and thought-provoking< Each person comes to the world without wings, only reading can make life fly Chongqing man fenwen "reading: the wings of life flying" begins)
the idea of this chapter is quite broad. Most people rarely associate reading with the topic of "wings". The examinee begins with a figurative sentence "everyone comes to the world without wings, only reading can make life fly", It highlights the theme of the article "reading the wings of life"
9. At the beginning, go straight to the theme
Example 9. An eagle has wings and can fly high; If an airplane has wings, it can fly in the blue sky. I also dream of a pair of wings, let me fly in the wind and rain, no one can block my dream of flying over the world Chongqing man Fen's article "if you give me a pair of wings" begins)
This beginning is inspired by eagles and airplanes, which tells "me" of my obsession with my dream, and sets up suspense for the following reasons to describe those who have wings
10. At the beginning of parallelism, inject poetic rhyme
example 11. The cloud is rolling and the cloud is comfortable, and what is comfortable is the purity of the soul; The past is the beauty of human nature; Flowers bloom and fall, bloom and fall is the soul of the Yuxiu fragrance Shandong Rizhao manfen essay "give me a chance to understand you")
the author's writing style is beautiful. At the beginning, he chooses several pictures in the nature for description, and uses the language of pawn. The sentence pattern is neat, catchy and full of charm< What is happiness Jining City, Shandong Province, is a famous city in China At the beginning, a single sentence into a paragraph, thought-provoking, causing the following. The following is a summary of eight people's views on happiness by using "Sima Qian theory", "Tao Qian theory", "Li Tai theory", "Liu Yuxi theory", "Chen Jingrun theory", "Lincoln theory", "Gandhi theory" and "I theory". The author's rich accumulation can be seen< [Topic post] what is happiness? Happiness is the smiling eyes shining with tears; It's a kind greeting in the ear; It's children playing on the beach; It's the old people in their twilight years who join hands in the sunset; It's a table for the whole family to enjoy themselves on the night of the Mid Autumn Festival... A thousand people have a thousand interpretations of "happiness", just as a thousand readers have a thousand "hamlets" If you don't believe it, please go to the "happiness" forum Tianjin man Fen's article "happy water in the forum" starts with "theme post" of the forum, using rhetorical questions to attract readers' attention, using parallelism to make reasoning, and using "a thousand people will have a thousand interpretations of" happiness ", just like a thousand" Hamlet "in the eyes of a thousand readers to summarize their own views on happiness. Fresh form, clever beginning, it's really a good move!
through this comprehensive practice, I got to know many people who win honor for our country and serve our motherland
for example, grandfather Yuan Longping, grandfather Li Siguang, beloved Premier Zhou, and loving Deng Xiaoping. Grandfather Yuan Longping, who invented hybrid rice, this technology has solved the food problem of the majority of the world's population. This invention makes the Chinese face full of light. Grandfather Li Siguang, when China was known as a country of poor oil, developed large oil fields and won glory for China. Premier Zhou, he gave a strong response to foreigners who ridiculed China, and worked hard for state affairs all day. He is worthy of being a good example for our people! Grandfather Deng Xiaoping, who loves the people like a son, will always be the people first and the self second in his mind. He is always running among the people. Grandfather Deng Xiaoping is always remembered by the people
these people have won honor for their country and served their motherland. It is very difficult for them to go on this road, and they will suffer a lot! However, they resolutely chose to take this road! They resolutely chose to serve the motherland and the broad masses of the people! Their selfless dedication to the motherland and the people is worthy of our admiration and learning
it is because of this comprehensive practical activity that I learned about them and their deeds. It is because of their deeds that we know their selfless dedication. Because of their selfless dedication, I will study hard and serve my motherland in the future.