元宇宙英語作文怎麼寫

⑴ 一篇英語作文怎麼寫

我來幫你。（我在澳大利亞5年了，英語可以的）是關於關愛兒童的，我覺得對你的水平已經很棒了。 The Caring of Children

Do we care about children today? No, people today don』t really care about children because we get
pushed about by alts. Children are also getting abused by alts at
home.

We children go into shops on our own and we get thrown out, or
followed around the shop. The shop owners think that we are going to
steal there goods of the shelves without paying for them. The shop
owners are having to put up more security cameras and prices of there
stock because we are stealing from them. They are putting up the
security cameras to watch where and what we are doing in the shop,
they are even following us to see what we are doing if the cameras
can』t see us, and they act as they are putting up new stock on the
shelves. If we have bags on our back the shop owner will sometimes ask
you to open your bag, so they can see weather you have anything,
showing that they don』t trust us.

Surveys show that one in six children today are getting severely hurt
at home by there parents. Only some parents are admitting to hitting
there children, and who do get hurt by there parents are to afraid to
tell someone about it. Research shows that a few parents put their
children』s heads under water and held it there, others have poured hot
water over them. A few mothers admit to pinching, scratching and
biting there children. Some children』s parents make them wash there
mouths out with salt and/or soap, and if they refuse to eat there
supper they are made to eat mustard sandwiches. In recent surveys it
is showed that mothers are more likely to hit their children than
fathers are, even when the care of the child or children are shared
evenly. Half of children in a survey said it was right for there
parents to smack them and are going to hit there children when they
are alts.

Some children who have jobs are working illegally in factories. The
children who work in factories don』t get paid fairly, an example of
this is in a carrot factory in England. In this factory there is
children working from the age of ten years old to fourteen years old,
who are getting paid thirty pence [IMAGE]a crate of carrots they fill.
Some of them are getting paid nine pounds for eighteen thousand
carrots. They are working for four hours each night, starting from
three thirty in the afternoon till seven o』clock in the evening. Two
million children are getting used as slave labour each year in
Britain. In the carrot factory the workers are working in terrible
conditions, they are working in a big shed which is run by a parish
councillor, on the floor there is wet carrots that have been dropped
and when the children are walking with the crates they can』t see very
well and may slip. The machines that they work on have very sharp
blades which are slicing the carrots, this is also where the children
are putting their hands to get the carrots out. Their hands are just
millimetres away from the blades and could end in a fatal accident.
Children should only work for two hours on a school day and no later
than seven o』clock in the evening. Since that report mothers and
fathers said that they were not going to send there children back.

Parks are now being designed by architects for younger children
between the age of two to nine years old, children over that age have
no place to go so they hang around the streets. When they hang around
the streets and get into bad habits like drug tacking and smocking at
young ages. Children from the age of ten and above want to explore new
things than be locked in a cage with swings and slides. We want to be
heard and seen by alt but they just ignore us all the time. We
children want a place where we can go to where there is only a couple
of alts. The government have just spent approximately four hundred
million pounds on the new parliament buildings in Edinburgh where they
could have spent some of that on us children. This year it is all
about the play station, micro scooter and gadgets. Children are now
into technology and want to see more of it. If a child had a choice
of either whether to play in a park for an half hour or to play a play
station for an half hour the child would definitely go for the play
station.

⑵ 英語作文怎麼寫呢

寫作思路及要點：以寒假趣事為題，圍繞的種種展開詳細描寫，接著表達自己的想法以及觀點。

正文：

寒假裡我有很多有趣的事，過年是最開心的。

I have a lot of interesting things in winter vacation, and Chinese New Year is the happiest.

在過年裡我和姐姐貼對聯，我知道了「福」字要倒著貼，表示福氣到。貼完對聯後，我和姐姐、爸爸回老區。

In the new year, my sister and I pasted couplets. I learned that the word "Fu" should be pasted backwards to show that we are lucky. After pasting the couplet, my sister and dad went back to the old district.

奶奶在買了一些好吃的'糖回家。我和姐姐都爭著吃。我自己還放了炮，雖然小孩子不讓放炮，要注意安全，但是我長大了，會放炮了。嘻嘻。

Grandma is buying some delicious sugar to go home. My sister and I are fighting for food. I also set off my own guns. Although children don't let them, they should pay attention to safety, but I grow up and can shoot. Hee hee.

我們團團圓圓的過了個好年，全家其樂融融。

We had a good year together and the whole family enjoyed themselves.

⑶ 這篇英語作文怎麼寫

Animals Need Protecting
Animals are natural resources that people have wasted all through our history. Animals have been killed for their fur and feathers, for food, for sport, and simply because they were in the way. Thousands of kinds of animals have disappeared from the earth forever. Hundreds more are on the danger list today. About 170 kinds in the United States aloneare considered in danger.
Why should people care? Because we need animals, and because once they are gone, there will never be any more.Animals are more than just beautiful or interesting. They are more than just a source of food. Every animal has its place in the balance of nature. Destroying one kind of animal can create many problems. For example, when farmers killed large numbers of hawks, the farmers' stores of corn and grain were destroyed by rats and mice. Why? Because hawks eat rats and mice, with no hawks to keep down their numbers, the rats and mice multiplied quickly.
Luckily, some people are working to help save the animals. Some groups raise money to let people know about the problem. And they try to get the governments to pass laws protecting animals in danger. Quite a few countries have passed laws. These laws forbid the killing of any animal or planton the danger list. Slowly, the number of some animals in danger is growing.

With human beings on Earth since then, we continue to evolve at the same time has been hurt those lovely animals. They did not at fault, they are only in accordance with the laws of nature live in peace. But since the existence of mankind , their homes become increasingly small. Some animals have even become extinct.
In the extinction of animal, the thylacine is the worst. Thylacine in a long time ago to live in the vast prairie, they have been very happy, carefree. Since the arrival of human beings have changed their lives. Due to the large number of human enclosure, livestock grass makes less and less change to many herbivores to move to other grasslands. This herbivorous animals to eat the wolf bag, there is no food. They steal human animals. Farmers would hate the wolf from the bag, see a killing one, on this last one wild thylacine was also killed. When people should be aware of extinct thylacine, the protection of the park began last a thylacine, it thylacine only 48 days before the final days. And 48 days later, the Forever thylacine disappeared from the Earth, the Forever!
So each has its biological significance of the existence, they are in the natural law of survival. If a broken food chain, then another will wantonly breeding animals, and even a threat to humanity, we bear in mind the protection of animals. The protection of animals is to protect human beings themselves!

給你了兩篇 看看 同意就採納吧 謝謝

⑷ 英語作文該怎麼寫

1最基本的好作文就是文章簡單通俗易懂，並且沒有語法錯誤，這樣的作文一般能拿B。不過這樣的文章也不是很好寫，這些文章一般都由一些簡單的短句構成，加入適當的正確的長句，如定語從句什麼的。在寫作中盡量少用那些你用文曲星查出來的自認為好的單詞，因為英語中單詞往往都會有褒義貶義與中性之分，用的不對反而笑話百出。在英文寫作中要慎用被動語態和完成時。這些在我們看來理所當然，其實並不為老外所喜歡。被動語態只有在三種情況下才用，一是主語或動作的執行者不重要時，二是他們不明確的時候，三是主語太長，為了使句子平衡才用。而現在國外一般都用現在過去將來三種時態，完成時是在很正規的場合才用。還要注意句子的主語一般都用具體的人或物來表示。如果你要引用或介紹書上的內容時一般都用現在時，一些科學原理也是如此。另外在寫英語文章時，要注意要寫得明確，一段寫一個內容，有時候每個小分段前加一個明顯的能概括全段的大寫字母也是個不錯的選擇（我的第一篇影評被老師表揚就是這個原因）。如果想要得A，那你一定得堅持天天讀一些美文才行，注意記和靈活運用裡面的美句。如果你一直得B+或B，那也不能沾沾自喜，我的寫作一直被全班甚至我自己公認為是最好的，但是有一天寫作老師當著全班的面點評我的文章時說，她現在已經找不出我文章中的語法錯誤了，但是如果我在這樣一直寫下去就沒有提高了，本來是一篇可以拿A的文章卻被我寫成了B+，就是因為不是一篇美文。當然我說的是大學的作文，如果你還是中學生的話，就參照B的那種吧，在盡量往上提高。我能想到的就是這些了，希望對你有些用，也希望你不要犯和我一樣的錯誤，加油！

2英語作文如何得高分

一般說來，每次考試後，閱卷老師要在很短的時間內評閱完大量的試卷，工作量非常大。盡管作文評分有具體的標准，但它仍然是主觀性較大的部分，而且寫作部分沒有「半分」的評分標准，有時我們閱卷之時的一念之差，就可能令你失去寶貴的一分。因此，這里我覺得介紹一些這些閱卷老師閱卷時的心理，對考生是極為有用的。

1.整潔的卷面和漂亮的書寫

漂亮的書寫令人賞心悅目，可使閱卷老師從疲憊不堪中解脫出來，給閱卷老師留下良好的第一印象。就我而言，每次批改作業，如遇龍飛鳳舞、字跡較為潦草者，均「押後處理」。說老實話，當改至後期，我便兩眼發直，精神極度疲憊，於是也龍飛鳳舞，草草給個分數，算是交差了。

2.字數要達到最低要求

因為作文對字數要求高，每篇小作文的字數在100-150字左右，大作文的字數必須達到160~200字左右，所以考生切記要在規定的范圍內完成自己的工作。但是，有些考生在寫作過程中總存在這樣的想法：寫的越長，閱卷老師的分數肯定會打得更高，其實未必。有時候，甚至會適得其反。試想，考生的文章是寫長了，但是考生同時又將自己的弱點暴露得「一覽無余」，那樣，考生怎麼可能得到高分呢？所以，考生應注意在寫作中長度一定要適當。

3.結構完整，脈絡清晰

考試時作文閱卷時間緊，且採用global scoring（整體評分）方法，因此閱卷老師不可能慢悠悠地欣賞你的大作。作文閱卷老師都是經驗非常豐富的大學英語教師，他們要在數分鍾內瀏覽完考生作文，給出評分意見。如何吸引閱卷老師的注意呢？我認為，一個完整框架是必不可少的，首先應讓閱卷老師覺得你的文章是結構完整合理、符合要求的。換言之，即具備英語文章的基本要素：引言段、擴展段和結尾段。引言段中要包含thesis statement（中心句），擴展段的每段均應有topic sentence（主題句），結尾段應該是一個自然收尾的段落。中文講究意合，而英語注意形合，要求句與句、段與段之間運用恰當的過渡詞，把上下文有機地連接起來。因此，應適當運用關鍵片語、套句，以吸引閱卷老師的「眼球」。

有些寫作的大作文要求用160~200詞寫出一篇高質量的議論文，其形式有圖示、漫畫、情景等專門類型。近幾年來則集中體現為靈活多變、隱含寓意的圖示/漫畫作文和具有學術分析特點的圖表作文。這要求考生要精確設置構架，內容、例子緊扣主題，並且嚴謹地遣詞造句。

⑸ 英語作文怎麼寫

首先是語法，在你的語法達到一定層次之後，你就可以追求更多的變化了，比如，用虛擬語氣句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it
is necessary that we
should……，又如用倒裝句代替常見的平鋪直敘等，這樣可以增加你的語法亮點，讓已經有些麻木一直想睡覺的閱卷老師眼睛一亮，在你的試卷上多掃射一番!
其次，是詞彙，我覺得，在你的語法達到基本不會出錯的程度上，作文便應該以詞彙取勝，因為在這個層次上，大家的語法都差不多，沒什麼變化，唯一有變化的就是你的詞彙!給你打個比方吧，很多想到「許多」就用many，但是你別忘了many
a ;handsome;massive，innumerable，a multitude of
;很多人想到「專家」就寫expert，但很少人會想到specialist，很多人在想到「擅長」這詞，就寫be good at ，卻不知還有更高級的表達法：be
expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就體現在這些細微的差別上!
再次，是怎麼將文章潤色，從而使你的文章大放異彩!!關於這方面，我覺得我自己使用最多的，也是我自創的------叫做「添油加醋」，包括如下幾個方面：盡可能地在形容詞前使用副詞，在介詞短語中加入適當的形容詞和副詞，在過去分詞前加入副詞，在名詞之前盡可能多用形容詞……，總之就是盡可能地使用形容詞和副詞。我覺得這樣做有一個好處，那就是使原本乾巴巴的句子變得血肉豐滿。

⑹ 英語作文怎麼寫

I am going to a senior middle school after the summer holidays. I wonder if I live at school or at school. If I live at school, I needn't spend much time staying on a bus or on the way to school. I can have more time to learn my lessons. My parents needn't pay attention to my meals, either. They can go to work freely. But there is another problem. If I live at school, I can't get delicious food just like at home. I can't sleep as well as at home because there may be four to six students in a room. If I have something interesting or sad to say, who will I talk to? Can I believe in my classmates? What should I do? I am looking forward to your advice.
Yours
Zhang Lin

⑺ 英語作文怎麼寫啊！

相對於英語的其它題目,作文的綜合要求可能更高一點,那麼我們就以這次考試的作文為例子來講講英語作文怎麼寫.
首先我先說說同學們在做作文的時候常常遇到的問題,然後我再給出一個大概的解決方法,最後呢,我們聯系這次考試的作文題來實戰一番.
從我們題目的要求來看,是一個記事的記敘文,並且是一個看圖說話類的,所有的素材都在我們的圖片裡面了.那麼我們就要先把圖片仔細的看一下,選好線索,顯然圖片裡面的鍾暗示我們選擇時間為我們的敘事線索.其次要選擇好一個時態的問題，我們可以以晚上回憶的方式來敘述這個事情。那麼都是過去時。
那麼開頭是一個比較困難的事情,大家也許不知道從何說起.這里我給出了一個例子.
Our
class
had
already
planned
to
go
to
Handian
Nursing
Home
to
visit
those
old
people
living
there
.
We
were
all
eager
to
go
there
as
soon
as
we
can.
And
today
this
time
really
came,
so
you
could
image
how
happy
we
were.
At
about
8:00
in
the
morning
,
with
tools
in
hands,
we
went
out
of
our
school
towards
the
Handian
Nursing
Home
下面我們不必過多的描述在路上的情形,我們重點將描述在敬老院裡面的情形.
It
was
about
9:00
when
we
arrived
there.
Though
we
were
a
little
tired,
none
of
us
wanted
to
have
a
rest.
As
some
of
those
old
people
seldom
came
out,
so
some
of
us
helped
them
walk
around
to
breathe
the
fresh
air.
Some
help
them
to
wash
their
clothes,
and
the
others
swept
the
ground.
Most
of
us
never
do
such
things
at
home,
so
we
maybe
didn』t
do
these
well,
but
we
all
tried
our
best.
At
about
11:55,we
had
lunch
with
them,
and
our
monitor
stood
for
us
to
bless
them
devoutly.
During
the
lunch
time,
we
were
all
very
happy.
After
lunch,
we
had
a
party
with
those
old
people.
Before
we
came
here,
we
had
already
prepared
some
songs
for
them.
As
we
expected,
they
all
felt
great
pleased
with
our
programs.
Though
maybe
we
didn』t
performed
well,
the
smile
on
their
faces
made
us
very
happy.
該到說再見的時候了,一定要注意收尾工作.
Happy
time
always
goes
fast.
Though
we
didn』t
notice
that
we
had
stayed
here
for
a
long
time,
the
clock
on
the
wall
informed
us
clearly
that
it
was
time
for
us
to
go
home.
So
we
had
to
say
good
bye
to
those
old
people.
On
the
way
home,
we
all
said
this
was
really
a
significant
day,
and
we
decided
to
come
back
again
whenever
we
had
time.

⑻ 這篇英語作文怎麼寫

How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
Scrambled egg with tomato is a home-cooked food, it both delicious and easy to do.

Do scrambled egg with tomato need raw materials have a tomato, three eggs, a green salt-pepper and oil.

First will tomatoes and green pepper and chop. Then the eggs break in a bowl and stir. Then the eggs bowl put some salt and stir. Finally the heating, put some oil in the pan, and then put into the tomato and egg and green pepper. Stir-fry well after turn off the heat with plate rigged up.

⑼ 這篇英語作文該怎麼寫啊

GRADE有評分 評級的意思 題目就是讓你討論這個觀點的正誤 或者說也就是要你討論學生到底應不應該（should or not）對他們的老師進行評級
這題跟我前段時間准備雅思的思路很類似 開頭段引出 主體部分就分兩方面寫 思路如下：（非官方哈~個人意見）
一段寫應該評級，並舉出的道理或者事實解釋說明：比如評級可以讓老師更加嚴格要求自己，提高老師的教學質量；或者說評級可以讓學生覺得他們與老師有一種互動產生，而不是被動的接受學校給他們安排的老師，他們甚至可以自己選擇自己認為好的老師，這加大了學生學習的積極性和公平性
另一段寫不應該評級，同理進行解釋論證：比如由於學生能評級讓老師不再是那麼高高在上的角色，可能會引發學生對老師的不尊重；或者說評級可能會讓學生過多的對老師的其他方面而不是學術建設的關注（老師私人生活啦什麼的），使學術氛圍不再嚴謹

結尾段寫出自己的看法，給出自己認為該評級或不該評級的理由，你可以完全支持其中一方，也可以說因為該或不該都有自己的理由，所以應該找到一個合適的方法 比如只給學術方面評不涉及教師行為習慣方面啦之類之類~

範文的話雅思有這種題然後有給出模板範文。。但是我的書借別人了沒法打不好意思啊 你可以直接復制題目到各大雅思論壇 應該會有人有的~

⑽ 英語作文怎麼寫啊

開頭段，開頭段是非常重要的，一定要語言簡練，切記一定要直接切入主題（有些同學在寫開頭段時遲遲不切入主題，會影響改卷老師對這篇作文的印象，或許還會認為你寫的跑題），而且開頭段一般不進行具體的論述。而且開頭段一定要引起讀者的注意，比如你可以將一句諺語放在開頭段。（As an old saying gose"No pains,no gains."So.......)這樣的開頭往往讓改卷老師眼前一亮。也可以使用提問，或者將問題概括進行開頭，總而言之開頭段一定要直接切入主題讓改卷老師了解文章的話題和風格，並且要引起讀者的興趣，吸引老師的注意力。而且開頭一定要注意與文章其餘部分相呼應。這樣的一篇開頭是英語寫作高分的基礎。

中間段，中間段是文章的主體部分，在中間段一定要將文章要求寫的東西涉及到（如果要求的東西有漏掉的話扣分是很嚴重的，如果漏掉的過多甚至會視為跑題），同時這一段要使用一些可以給自己提分的句型，讓改卷老師明白你的水平，比如你可以使用一些倒裝句、強調句、或者你可以使用一些固定搭配像There is no doubt that.......(毫無疑問的是...），I firmly belive that......(我堅信...)都是很好的提分句式，像這類句式平時要多積累。如果你的單詞量比較大的話，就將簡單的詞彙換成高級詞彙，這也可以讓改卷老師眼前一亮。同時這一段的過渡關系一定要處理好，熟練的運用一些過渡詞語例如:as far as I am concerned,in a word,what is more,in my opinion 只有恰當的使用過渡詞才能讓文章顯得流利通順而且句與句之間的銜接更加緊密，文章也會更加緊湊，而且要使用一些長句也就是復合句（同位語從句，賓語從句，主語從句等等），但不可全部都使用長句，否則讀起來會有一種費力之感，所以要長短句合理的搭配使用. 內容也要按著一定的順序來描寫，不能給人一種很亂的感覺。