元宇宙英语作文怎么写

⑴ 一篇英语作文怎么写

我来帮你。（我在澳大利亚5年了，英语可以的）是关于关爱儿童的，我觉得对你的水平已经很棒了。 The Caring of Children

Do we care about children today? No, people today don’t really care about children because we get
pushed about by alts. Children are also getting abused by alts at
home.

We children go into shops on our own and we get thrown out, or
followed around the shop. The shop owners think that we are going to
steal there goods of the shelves without paying for them. The shop
owners are having to put up more security cameras and prices of there
stock because we are stealing from them. They are putting up the
security cameras to watch where and what we are doing in the shop,
they are even following us to see what we are doing if the cameras
can’t see us, and they act as they are putting up new stock on the
shelves. If we have bags on our back the shop owner will sometimes ask
you to open your bag, so they can see weather you have anything,
showing that they don’t trust us.

Surveys show that one in six children today are getting severely hurt
at home by there parents. Only some parents are admitting to hitting
there children, and who do get hurt by there parents are to afraid to
tell someone about it. Research shows that a few parents put their
children’s heads under water and held it there, others have poured hot
water over them. A few mothers admit to pinching, scratching and
biting there children. Some children’s parents make them wash there
mouths out with salt and/or soap, and if they refuse to eat there
supper they are made to eat mustard sandwiches. In recent surveys it
is showed that mothers are more likely to hit their children than
fathers are, even when the care of the child or children are shared
evenly. Half of children in a survey said it was right for there
parents to smack them and are going to hit there children when they
are alts.

Some children who have jobs are working illegally in factories. The
children who work in factories don’t get paid fairly, an example of
this is in a carrot factory in England. In this factory there is
children working from the age of ten years old to fourteen years old,
who are getting paid thirty pence [IMAGE]a crate of carrots they fill.
Some of them are getting paid nine pounds for eighteen thousand
carrots. They are working for four hours each night, starting from
three thirty in the afternoon till seven o’clock in the evening. Two
million children are getting used as slave labour each year in
Britain. In the carrot factory the workers are working in terrible
conditions, they are working in a big shed which is run by a parish
councillor, on the floor there is wet carrots that have been dropped
and when the children are walking with the crates they can’t see very
well and may slip. The machines that they work on have very sharp
blades which are slicing the carrots, this is also where the children
are putting their hands to get the carrots out. Their hands are just
millimetres away from the blades and could end in a fatal accident.
Children should only work for two hours on a school day and no later
than seven o’clock in the evening. Since that report mothers and
fathers said that they were not going to send there children back.

Parks are now being designed by architects for younger children
between the age of two to nine years old, children over that age have
no place to go so they hang around the streets. When they hang around
the streets and get into bad habits like drug tacking and smocking at
young ages. Children from the age of ten and above want to explore new
things than be locked in a cage with swings and slides. We want to be
heard and seen by alt but they just ignore us all the time. We
children want a place where we can go to where there is only a couple
of alts. The government have just spent approximately four hundred
million pounds on the new parliament buildings in Edinburgh where they
could have spent some of that on us children. This year it is all
about the play station, micro scooter and gadgets. Children are now
into technology and want to see more of it. If a child had a choice
of either whether to play in a park for an half hour or to play a play
station for an half hour the child would definitely go for the play
station.

⑵ 英语作文怎么写呢

写作思路及要点：以寒假趣事为题，围绕的种种展开详细描写，接着表达自己的想法以及观点。

正文：

寒假里我有很多有趣的事，过年是最开心的。

I have a lot of interesting things in winter vacation, and Chinese New Year is the happiest.

在过年里我和姐姐贴对联，我知道了“福”字要倒着贴，表示福气到。贴完对联后，我和姐姐、爸爸回老区。

In the new year, my sister and I pasted couplets. I learned that the word "Fu" should be pasted backwards to show that we are lucky. After pasting the couplet, my sister and dad went back to the old district.

奶奶在买了一些好吃的'糖回家。我和姐姐都争着吃。我自己还放了炮，虽然小孩子不让放炮，要注意安全，但是我长大了，会放炮了。嘻嘻。

Grandma is buying some delicious sugar to go home. My sister and I are fighting for food. I also set off my own guns. Although children don't let them, they should pay attention to safety, but I grow up and can shoot. Hee hee.

我们团团圆圆的过了个好年，全家其乐融融。

We had a good year together and the whole family enjoyed themselves.

⑶ 这篇英语作文怎么写

Animals Need Protecting
Animals are natural resources that people have wasted all through our history. Animals have been killed for their fur and feathers, for food, for sport, and simply because they were in the way. Thousands of kinds of animals have disappeared from the earth forever. Hundreds more are on the danger list today. About 170 kinds in the United States aloneare considered in danger.
Why should people care? Because we need animals, and because once they are gone, there will never be any more.Animals are more than just beautiful or interesting. They are more than just a source of food. Every animal has its place in the balance of nature. Destroying one kind of animal can create many problems. For example, when farmers killed large numbers of hawks, the farmers' stores of corn and grain were destroyed by rats and mice. Why? Because hawks eat rats and mice, with no hawks to keep down their numbers, the rats and mice multiplied quickly.
Luckily, some people are working to help save the animals. Some groups raise money to let people know about the problem. And they try to get the governments to pass laws protecting animals in danger. Quite a few countries have passed laws. These laws forbid the killing of any animal or planton the danger list. Slowly, the number of some animals in danger is growing.

With human beings on Earth since then, we continue to evolve at the same time has been hurt those lovely animals. They did not at fault, they are only in accordance with the laws of nature live in peace. But since the existence of mankind , their homes become increasingly small. Some animals have even become extinct.
In the extinction of animal, the thylacine is the worst. Thylacine in a long time ago to live in the vast prairie, they have been very happy, carefree. Since the arrival of human beings have changed their lives. Due to the large number of human enclosure, livestock grass makes less and less change to many herbivores to move to other grasslands. This herbivorous animals to eat the wolf bag, there is no food. They steal human animals. Farmers would hate the wolf from the bag, see a killing one, on this last one wild thylacine was also killed. When people should be aware of extinct thylacine, the protection of the park began last a thylacine, it thylacine only 48 days before the final days. And 48 days later, the Forever thylacine disappeared from the Earth, the Forever!
So each has its biological significance of the existence, they are in the natural law of survival. If a broken food chain, then another will wantonly breeding animals, and even a threat to humanity, we bear in mind the protection of animals. The protection of animals is to protect human beings themselves!

给你了两篇 看看 同意就采纳吧 谢谢

⑷ 英语作文该怎么写

1最基本的好作文就是文章简单通俗易懂，并且没有语法错误，这样的作文一般能拿B。不过这样的文章也不是很好写，这些文章一般都由一些简单的短句构成，加入适当的正确的长句，如定语从句什么的。在写作中尽量少用那些你用文曲星查出来的自认为好的单词，因为英语中单词往往都会有褒义贬义与中性之分，用的不对反而笑话百出。在英文写作中要慎用被动语态和完成时。这些在我们看来理所当然，其实并不为老外所喜欢。被动语态只有在三种情况下才用，一是主语或动作的执行者不重要时，二是他们不明确的时候，三是主语太长，为了使句子平衡才用。而现在国外一般都用现在过去将来三种时态，完成时是在很正规的场合才用。还要注意句子的主语一般都用具体的人或物来表示。如果你要引用或介绍书上的内容时一般都用现在时，一些科学原理也是如此。另外在写英语文章时，要注意要写得明确，一段写一个内容，有时候每个小分段前加一个明显的能概括全段的大写字母也是个不错的选择（我的第一篇影评被老师表扬就是这个原因）。如果想要得A，那你一定得坚持天天读一些美文才行，注意记和灵活运用里面的美句。如果你一直得B+或B，那也不能沾沾自喜，我的写作一直被全班甚至我自己公认为是最好的，但是有一天写作老师当着全班的面点评我的文章时说，她现在已经找不出我文章中的语法错误了，但是如果我在这样一直写下去就没有提高了，本来是一篇可以拿A的文章却被我写成了B+，就是因为不是一篇美文。当然我说的是大学的作文，如果你还是中学生的话，就参照B的那种吧，在尽量往上提高。我能想到的就是这些了，希望对你有些用，也希望你不要犯和我一样的错误，加油！

2英语作文如何得高分

一般说来，每次考试后，阅卷老师要在很短的时间内评阅完大量的试卷，工作量非常大。尽管作文评分有具体的标准，但它仍然是主观性较大的部分，而且写作部分没有“半分”的评分标准，有时我们阅卷之时的一念之差，就可能令你失去宝贵的一分。因此，这里我觉得介绍一些这些阅卷老师阅卷时的心理，对考生是极为有用的。

1.整洁的卷面和漂亮的书写

漂亮的书写令人赏心悦目，可使阅卷老师从疲惫不堪中解脱出来，给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。就我而言，每次批改作业，如遇龙飞凤舞、字迹较为潦草者，均“押后处理”。说老实话，当改至后期，我便两眼发直，精神极度疲惫，于是也龙飞凤舞，草草给个分数，算是交差了。

2.字数要达到最低要求

因为作文对字数要求高，每篇小作文的字数在100-150字左右，大作文的字数必须达到160~200字左右，所以考生切记要在规定的范围内完成自己的工作。但是，有些考生在写作过程中总存在这样的想法：写的越长，阅卷老师的分数肯定会打得更高，其实未必。有时候，甚至会适得其反。试想，考生的文章是写长了，但是考生同时又将自己的弱点暴露得“一览无余”，那样，考生怎么可能得到高分呢？所以，考生应注意在写作中长度一定要适当。

3.结构完整，脉络清晰

考试时作文阅卷时间紧，且采用global scoring（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。作文阅卷老师都是经验非常丰富的大学英语教师，他们要在数分钟内浏览完考生作文，给出评分意见。如何吸引阅卷老师的注意呢？我认为，一个完整框架是必不可少的，首先应让阅卷老师觉得你的文章是结构完整合理、符合要求的。换言之，即具备英语文章的基本要素：引言段、扩展段和结尾段。引言段中要包含thesis statement（中心句），扩展段的每段均应有topic sentence（主题句），结尾段应该是一个自然收尾的段落。中文讲究意合，而英语注意形合，要求句与句、段与段之间运用恰当的过渡词，把上下文有机地连接起来。因此，应适当运用关键词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。

有些写作的大作文要求用160~200词写出一篇高质量的议论文，其形式有图示、漫画、情景等专门类型。近几年来则集中体现为灵活多变、隐含寓意的图示/漫画作文和具有学术分析特点的图表作文。这要求考生要精确设置构架，内容、例子紧扣主题，并且严谨地遣词造句。

⑸ 英语作文怎么写

首先是语法，在你的语法达到一定层次之后，你就可以追求更多的变化了，比如，用虚拟语气句型it is high time that we……代替常用的it
is necessary that we
should……，又如用倒装句代替常见的平铺直叙等，这样可以增加你的语法亮点，让已经有些麻木一直想睡觉的阅卷老师眼睛一亮，在你的试卷上多扫射一番!
其次，是词汇，我觉得，在你的语法达到基本不会出错的程度上，作文便应该以词汇取胜，因为在这个层次上，大家的语法都差不多，没什么变化，唯一有变化的就是你的词汇!给你打个比方吧，很多想到“许多”就用many，但是你别忘了many
a ;handsome;massive，innumerable，a multitude of
;很多人想到“专家”就写expert，但很少人会想到specialist，很多人在想到“擅长”这词，就写be good at ，却不知还有更高级的表达法：be
expert at 或者excel in …高手和庸才，就体现在这些细微的差别上!
再次，是怎么将文章润色，从而使你的文章大放异彩!!关于这方面，我觉得我自己使用最多的，也是我自创的------叫做“添油加醋”，包括如下几个方面：尽可能地在形容词前使用副词，在介词短语中加入适当的形容词和副词，在过去分词前加入副词，在名词之前尽可能多用形容词……，总之就是尽可能地使用形容词和副词。我觉得这样做有一个好处，那就是使原本干巴巴的句子变得血肉丰满。

⑹ 英语作文怎么写

I am going to a senior middle school after the summer holidays. I wonder if I live at school or at school. If I live at school, I needn't spend much time staying on a bus or on the way to school. I can have more time to learn my lessons. My parents needn't pay attention to my meals, either. They can go to work freely. But there is another problem. If I live at school, I can't get delicious food just like at home. I can't sleep as well as at home because there may be four to six students in a room. If I have something interesting or sad to say, who will I talk to? Can I believe in my classmates? What should I do? I am looking forward to your advice.
Yours
Zhang Lin

⑺ 英语作文怎么写啊！

相对于英语的其它题目,作文的综合要求可能更高一点,那么我们就以这次考试的作文为例子来讲讲英语作文怎么写.
首先我先说说同学们在做作文的时候常常遇到的问题,然后我再给出一个大概的解决方法,最后呢,我们联系这次考试的作文题来实战一番.
从我们题目的要求来看,是一个记事的记叙文,并且是一个看图说话类的,所有的素材都在我们的图片里面了.那么我们就要先把图片仔细的看一下,选好线索,显然图片里面的钟暗示我们选择时间为我们的叙事线索.其次要选择好一个时态的问题，我们可以以晚上回忆的方式来叙述这个事情。那么都是过去时。
那么开头是一个比较困难的事情,大家也许不知道从何说起.这里我给出了一个例子.
Our
class
had
already
planned
to
go
to
Handian
Nursing
Home
to
visit
those
old
people
living
there
.
We
were
all
eager
to
go
there
as
soon
as
we
can.
And
today
this
time
really
came,
so
you
could
image
how
happy
we
were.
At
about
8:00
in
the
morning
,
with
tools
in
hands,
we
went
out
of
our
school
towards
the
Handian
Nursing
Home
下面我们不必过多的描述在路上的情形,我们重点将描述在敬老院里面的情形.
It
was
about
9:00
when
we
arrived
there.
Though
we
were
a
little
tired,
none
of
us
wanted
to
have
a
rest.
As
some
of
those
old
people
seldom
came
out,
so
some
of
us
helped
them
walk
around
to
breathe
the
fresh
air.
Some
help
them
to
wash
their
clothes,
and
the
others
swept
the
ground.
Most
of
us
never
do
such
things
at
home,
so
we
maybe
didn’t
do
these
well,
but
we
all
tried
our
best.
At
about
11:55,we
had
lunch
with
them,
and
our
monitor
stood
for
us
to
bless
them
devoutly.
During
the
lunch
time,
we
were
all
very
happy.
After
lunch,
we
had
a
party
with
those
old
people.
Before
we
came
here,
we
had
already
prepared
some
songs
for
them.
As
we
expected,
they
all
felt
great
pleased
with
our
programs.
Though
maybe
we
didn’t
performed
well,
the
smile
on
their
faces
made
us
very
happy.
该到说再见的时候了,一定要注意收尾工作.
Happy
time
always
goes
fast.
Though
we
didn’t
notice
that
we
had
stayed
here
for
a
long
time,
the
clock
on
the
wall
informed
us
clearly
that
it
was
time
for
us
to
go
home.
So
we
had
to
say
good
bye
to
those
old
people.
On
the
way
home,
we
all
said
this
was
really
a
significant
day,
and
we
decided
to
come
back
again
whenever
we
had
time.

⑻ 这篇英语作文怎么写

How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
Scrambled egg with tomato is a home-cooked food, it both delicious and easy to do.

Do scrambled egg with tomato need raw materials have a tomato, three eggs, a green salt-pepper and oil.

First will tomatoes and green pepper and chop. Then the eggs break in a bowl and stir. Then the eggs bowl put some salt and stir. Finally the heating, put some oil in the pan, and then put into the tomato and egg and green pepper. Stir-fry well after turn off the heat with plate rigged up.

⑼ 这篇英语作文该怎么写啊

GRADE有评分 评级的意思 题目就是让你讨论这个观点的正误 或者说也就是要你讨论学生到底应不应该（should or not）对他们的老师进行评级
这题跟我前段时间准备雅思的思路很类似 开头段引出 主体部分就分两方面写 思路如下：（非官方哈~个人意见）
一段写应该评级，并举出的道理或者事实解释说明：比如评级可以让老师更加严格要求自己，提高老师的教学质量；或者说评级可以让学生觉得他们与老师有一种互动产生，而不是被动的接受学校给他们安排的老师，他们甚至可以自己选择自己认为好的老师，这加大了学生学习的积极性和公平性
另一段写不应该评级，同理进行解释论证：比如由于学生能评级让老师不再是那么高高在上的角色，可能会引发学生对老师的不尊重；或者说评级可能会让学生过多的对老师的其他方面而不是学术建设的关注（老师私人生活啦什么的），使学术氛围不再严谨

结尾段写出自己的看法，给出自己认为该评级或不该评级的理由，你可以完全支持其中一方，也可以说因为该或不该都有自己的理由，所以应该找到一个合适的方法 比如只给学术方面评不涉及教师行为习惯方面啦之类之类~

范文的话雅思有这种题然后有给出模板范文。。但是我的书借别人了没法打不好意思啊 你可以直接复制题目到各大雅思论坛 应该会有人有的~

⑽ 英语作文怎么写啊

开头段，开头段是非常重要的，一定要语言简练，切记一定要直接切入主题（有些同学在写开头段时迟迟不切入主题，会影响改卷老师对这篇作文的印象，或许还会认为你写的跑题），而且开头段一般不进行具体的论述。而且开头段一定要引起读者的注意，比如你可以将一句谚语放在开头段。（As an old saying gose"No pains,no gains."So.......)这样的开头往往让改卷老师眼前一亮。也可以使用提问，或者将问题概括进行开头，总而言之开头段一定要直接切入主题让改卷老师了解文章的话题和风格，并且要引起读者的兴趣，吸引老师的注意力。而且开头一定要注意与文章其余部分相呼应。这样的一篇开头是英语写作高分的基础。

中间段，中间段是文章的主体部分，在中间段一定要将文章要求写的东西涉及到（如果要求的东西有漏掉的话扣分是很严重的，如果漏掉的过多甚至会视为跑题），同时这一段要使用一些可以给自己提分的句型，让改卷老师明白你的水平，比如你可以使用一些倒装句、强调句、或者你可以使用一些固定搭配像There is no doubt that.......(毫无疑问的是...），I firmly belive that......(我坚信...)都是很好的提分句式，像这类句式平时要多积累。如果你的单词量比较大的话，就将简单的词汇换成高级词汇，这也可以让改卷老师眼前一亮。同时这一段的过渡关系一定要处理好，熟练的运用一些过渡词语例如:as far as I am concerned,in a word,what is more,in my opinion 只有恰当的使用过渡词才能让文章显得流利通顺而且句与句之间的衔接更加紧密，文章也会更加紧凑，而且要使用一些长句也就是复合句（同位语从句，宾语从句，主语从句等等），但不可全部都使用长句，否则读起来会有一种费力之感，所以要长短句合理的搭配使用. 内容也要按着一定的顺序来描写，不能给人一种很乱的感觉。